Idaira+Cahora+Eoi

It was a [great? fantastic? wonderful?] surprise to receive your letter yesterday saying I had won first prize. Thank you very much. Among the different options, I would like to go to Sydney because of its variety of animals and beaches. Concerning the prize, I have got some questions I would like to ask.

First of all, you wrote that I have been awarded a return flight [this is singular] I would like to know if there is any possibility to fly directly to Sydney ones to avoid travelling for two days. [this sentence wasn't very clear --]

Secondly, you did not mention how long we [will be taught?] are being teacher every day, and if the classes are in the afternoon or in the morning, I would also [you should use also or additionally] like to know if I have to book in advance day trips or some [why some?] excursions to visit the city in my free time.

In regards accommodation with a family, I would like to know if all meals are included. I would also like to know if I could cook by myself.

Finally, I would like to know if there is any option to stay at school for an extra week. I am going in September and I would like to be there at least three weeks. If it is possible, please let me know the extra money I will have to pay. [better: please inform me of the difference in cost]

Thank you in advance. I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours faithfully

Idaira Cahora Carrascosa Cruz